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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Please see this quick paintover showing what I mean. In it, I've sourced the cooler background areas and your pink light sources to add color to your shadows. I also added a very slight blue tint to the areas of skin.
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Mechanically, this is a fairly uncomfortable pose, albeit no less comfortable than the way some people draw women. It's believable, and you appear to use it in a way that aids the silhouette, so that's good.
I do however take issue with the crotch guard, as it limits your character's mobility. Should he bend over or raise his leg wrong, he stabs himself in the gut. Similar mobility issues are possible with what looks like armor on his thighs, if indeed those are metal.
In the end, it's another fantastic piece of work from you. Well conceived, rendered, and presented.
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