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First off, let me say, WOW!
The texture that you gave the hair is incredible, and the shading is absolutely superb! On top of that, you have done a very good job of keeping the picture anatomically correct, which I've noticed a lot of people to tend to screw up, because they get so distracted by lady parts! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD - "/>
Ok, so on to the critiquing:
First, it's just a tad bit distracting that the ends of her limbs seem to be dissapearing!! I would have loved to see where the right arm was going, if it was going to be in cuffs or chains, or maybe just a stump! The legs, however, are really fine the way they are. It creates a nice line for the eyes to follow.
Second, although you did a lovely job with it, the neck seems like it's a teensy-tiney bit too long. I know some girls have long necks(I know, because I do! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick) - "/>), but the angle and the way you showed the muscle/tendons etc. would usually indicate a slightly shorter neck. Oh well. Once again, it's not that bad, and it's not that distracting. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/> Pointers for future work I guess! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD - "/>
Third, the shading you did is absolutely awe-inspiring! My only issue is that the left breast and the face almost look like they are just, for a lack of a better word, flat, or 2D. There could have been a tiney bit more shading, just to give emphasis on shape. I know the light was coming in on that angle, so it would take away from shadow, but there are tiny little ways of adding the emphasizing shadow!
Well, that's about it... I've got to say, absolutely incredible work! I just can't get over how well you shaded and did the hair!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Eek) - "/>